On the first Friday of each
month, Novelista Annie Burrows will be drawing a question out of the jar where
we've been putting all the questions about the writing process posed by readers
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This month, the question that came out of the jar was:
How do you decide on how many
secondary characters should appear in a book?
1) Planned out list?
2) As and when required?
That's a very good question
Cheryl! (waves)
As you know, I write for
Harlequin Mills & Boon, so the focus is very much on the two main characters,
and their love story.
However, they do need a world
in which to act out their story, and I do have to populate it with secondary
characters.
When I first start thinking
about any story, the first thing I do is imagine the backstory of my hero and
heroine. I have to know what kind of
childhood they had, which means placing them in a family. And at this stage I often do write out a list
of "the sisters and the cousins and the aunts" (to paraphrase W. S.
Gilbert.) I may also give them a pet
such as a dog, and since my books are set in Regency England, a horse (with its
own personality.)
There may also be a villain,
with henchmen, who will also go on the list.
But then I start
writing. And my characters, at this
point, become much more rounded. And the
world in which I have them moving becomes far more detailed as well. As the story develops, I do find I need
"extras", as well as the initial cast I drew up. A butler, to answer the door, a footman to
carry a note, a maidservant to help my heroine dress and undress, and various
lords and ladies to populate the ballrooms.
But then, sometimes,
characters also just walk into the story without my say so because they decide
they have a part to play.
For instance, when I was
working on the Silk and Scandal series, I sent my heroine to the house of her
estranged half brother, and when she knocked on the door, it was opened by an
Indian manservant I never knew existed before.
Since another author was
responsible for the part of the series that dealt with this half brother, I
immediately e-mailed her, to tell her what had happened. I think the email went something like -
"Midge has just knocked on Stephano's door, and it has been opened by an
Indian manservant. Have you any idea
where he came from?"
As this email went to another
author, she was not at all phased by this, and immediately emailed back with a
whole story of how Stephano had rescued this man whilst seeking out jewels in India, and how he was now a devoted servant who would
protect his master with his life.
It was as if neither of us
invented him. He was just there,
hovering in the wings, waiting to walk on and play his part.
So, in short, the answer to
the two-part question is Yes! Both! I start off planning the characters I think
I'm going to need, add others when I need them, and also get surprised by
characters I didn't know were lurking in the background, who simply want to get
in on the act.
So - do you have any
questions about the writing process you would like to ask?
If so, please leave your
question in the comments box. All
questions will go into the jar, and I will draw one out each month.
Annie's latest release is "In Bed with the Duke" which you can buy from Harlequin in the US or Mills & Boon in the UK
I know exactly what you mean about characters suddenly appearing out of nowhere. I was halfway through a manuscript when my heroine's brother suddenly appeared and proceeded to play a major role in the denouement. He never appeared in the synopsis I'd written on which this book was sold to my publisher. But he was crucial to the story I wrote!
ReplyDeleteLOL - I have had characters like that - pushy. He will be demanding his own story before you know it Amelia!
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